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The Voices In My Head

(He’s one of the many voices in my head. ;) And okay, it’s also just a reason to throw a gratuitous picture of Steve Boyd in this post.)

As an author, I find voices to be intriguing. Different authors’ voices, yes, but also all the many voices for characters that an author has inside them. Authors usually have more than one type of character that they write, whether it be the plain, shy heroine or the silent, tortured hero. The sultry seductress or the devil-may-care rake. And that’s just historical. Think of the maniacal villains in romantic suspense, the fun girl-next-door or the hard-working corporate-ladder-climbing woman in contemporaries. The protective, possessive don’t-make-me-get-alpha-on-your-butt paranormal heroes, the hardened-yet-secretly-vulnerable urban fantasy heroines. (Okay, I think I’ll stop with the hyphens. =)

Inside each author are dozens of voices, probably even hundreds of voices waiting to get out. Many romance authors write across sub-genres (for example, I know Shana has written chick lit in addition to historicals, and the contemporary Cate Lord is the alias of historical Catherine Kean). I know that with my own writing process, the books I tend to get the most excited about writing are the books where out of the blue I just hear a character’s voice in my head. It’ll be a line of dialogue made very distinct by the words, yes, but also by the way it’s said. (For example, think of Rhett Butler and “Frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn.” That’s so unique to Rhett.) But when I say “voices”, I don’t just mean the things they say, but how they’re revealed through internal narrative as well.

Like other authors, I have several types of voices. Here is the hero from THE SINNING HOUR– Simon Astley, a nude portraitist.

Even here, Miranda was everywhere he looked, her memory his constant companion. He saw her dusting a rag over the gilded frames, reaching high to straighten the drapes. He climbed the grand staircase to the first floor, wondering how she would view his commission by the gaming hell’s owners. She’d doubtless chastise him for entering this den of vice, or look at him with that same silent reprimand she’d given him when he flirted with his models.

Innocent. She was so innocent. And oh, but how he’d longed to corrupt her.

Simon exhaled a jagged breath of laughter, his fists clenching. Discipline forced his fingers apart, urged him to smooth his hand along the stair banister, to admire the gleaming mahogany and the sensuous slide of it beneath his palm. Anything but to dwell on her, to submit to this despair that continued to close in each day without her.

The bolded line above is the essence of Simon to me. In this novella Simon strives to become a better man for Miranda, because that’s what he thinks he has to do in order to deserve her, but no matter how much he tries to reform, he’s still a bad boy at heart.

On the other hand, here is the voice of a heroine from a contemporary romance I’m experimenting with (note the word experimenting =)).

It always started innocently enough.

A quick glance. A smile. “Hi, I’m Kate.”

He might nod, might tell her his name if he felt like being polite. Then, without another word, she’d move in like a porn goddess intent on giving him his happy ending.

Unfortunately, today was no different.

“Ow! That’s hot!”

Kate rubbed more oil into the model’s hairless chest in brisk, efficient strokes. “Sorry,” she muttered. Someday, she’d really like to have a gorgeous man do more than whine when she touched him or grumble when she asked him to turn around so she could massage the oil into his butt cheeks.

As I said above, I’m experimenting with this voice. It might not be the one that I stick with for this heroine or for this book, although I do like the snarkiness. =)

But overall, I love that as an author I’m able to do this kind of experimenting. In fact, I experimented with Simon’s voice in THE SINNING HOUR for a while, trying to find the perfect combination of come-hither wickedness and desperation for his character. Not only do I get to create worlds of fictional people and their love stories, I also get to determine how they sound and, as a result, how a reader will relate to them and picture them in their mind.

This, perhaps, might be my favorite part of writing. It’s empowering, fun, and most of all, I can tell the people who look at me like I’m crazy (*cough* my family *cough*) that the voices really do speak to me. ;)

Do you notice “voices” when you read, whether an author’s voice or a character’s specific voice? Do you have favorite characters from past books who stood out to you because of their voice? (For example, Michael from Julia Quinn’s WHEN HE WAS WICKED is a favorite of mine because of this.)

 

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  1. Kristan Higgins Said:

    I think the actual book quote was, “My dear, I don’t give a damn.” It was said wearily, not the jaunty way Clark Gable said it. Broke my heart. But as for character voice, I have to go all literary here and say Olive Kitteridge from the book of the same name by Elizabeth Strout. A tough old Mainer without a lot of mercy in her soul when the book begins. Master class in writing, that book…

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Hi Kristan! I have to admit I did a lazy Google search of the phrase to see if that was really correct. Lazy, because I didn’t search that far. ;) Thanks for letting me know! =) And thank you for the great book recommendation!

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  2. Emily McKay Said:

    For me, one of the strongest voices in fiction is Amelia Peabody from Elizabeth Peters fantastic books. I mean, all the characters in those books are great, but especially Amelia. She so vivid just a line or two of dialogue can have me cracking up.

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Hi Emily! I’ve heard such great things about the Amelia Peabody series! I’m thinking I really need to check it out soon. =)

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  3. Shana Galen Said:

    I definitely hear differences in character voices in my favorite authors’ books. It usually takes me a few chapters to get a character’s voice straight in my head, and I’ve found the more I write the more that voice solidifies. As far as writing in different genres, it helped me to write my contemps in first person because I have such a strong historical voice when I write in third. It likes to take over, and pretty soon my twenty-first century characters were taking their leaves and telling one another to stubble it.

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Great point about the change in POV, Shana! And lol on the historical voice taking over. Yes, I can definitely see that happening. However, I think I’d also like a contemporary character who says “stubble it” all the time. ;)

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  4. Olivia Kelly Said:

    I think the reason I love to read so much is that I hear the characters in my head all the time, unless the writing is so atrocious that I can’t get into the novel.
    One of my favorites is Julia Quinn’s Simon Basset, from The Duke & I. I can hear him so clearly when I read that book.
    I hear these voices all the time. Sometimes, when I’m driving, I have to whip out the iPhone & use the recorder to take down a few lines or a conversation that popped into my head,, full-blown. ;-)

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      That’s a great example, Olivia! (And another of my faves by JQ.) When the dialogue happens, I always feel like it’s a special gift, because only the strongest character voices come to me out of the blue. =) (I wish all of them would! lol)

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  5. RobynDeHart Said:

    Oh yes, I definitely hear voices, my character voices that is. And though it takes a while to really nail down a character (I’m a draft writer) I usually will have one line, like the one you marked above that really solidifies the character’s essence to me. I even still remember the one that brought Max from Desire Me alive on the page.

    As a reader, I think Suzanne Enoch is a master at this as well as Pamela Morsi, I can always hear their characters clearly.

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Hi Robyn! I have to admit, as a reader I’m drawn to authors who have distinct character voices, too. I’m reading a book right now where I’m finding a hard time connecting with the characters because they don’t seem distinct at all, which is a pity because I think the book would be great otherwise.

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  6. Jane Myers Perrine Said:

    I really like the “experimental” voice. However, I was so distracted by the photo at the top of your blog, I almost didn’t read it. ;-) And I, too, hear voices–very often at church when I have to start scribbling madly on the bulletin or in the car when I can’t write their words down.

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Hi Jane! *grin* He’s pretty marvelous, isn’t he? And thank you! Glad to know the experimental voice works, even if I don’t decide to keep it for this specific heroine. =) As for you scribbling in church…dare I guess that your mind wanders during the sermons? ;)

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  7. Terri Brisbin Said:

    Elise –

    Yes!! I have voices in my head that aren’t my own! LOL! I’ve lived with them for years…and they change as my stories are written and new ideas begin.

    BTW — do not, DO NOT, admit to a healthcare professional that you hear voices….especially not during sleep study stuff…. I did and my next visit was with a psychologist! LOL…. He understood that creative people hear them..but it was a near thing for a while!

    Terri

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      LOL! That’s hilarious, Terri! It would be just my luck, too, to also have that happen to me. Just another reason I love the writing community–we all know we’re crazy and we don’t mind. ;)

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  8. Na S. Said:

    I do hear different voices emerging in a story and they take on a life of their own. Characters are so important to me and when the yare distinct it shows in their voice and actions. They vary from stories. Stephanie Plum has a memorable voice – the things that goes through her mind!

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Hi Na! I was just thinking about this recently, about how important it is to make a character unique by showing how the things they do and the things they think/say are different from what every other person may say/do/think. It sounds like an elemental thing, but I think it really takes a writer digging deep into the character to come up with someone that three-dimension. In summary… you’re right. ;)

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  9. catslady Said:

    When the character has an accent it seems to strengthen the voice for me.

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Great point, catslady! I also wonder if this is because you (or at least I do as a reader) have to slow down to focus on the accent.

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  10. Margo Maguire Said:

    It’s more the overall ‘voice’ of the book that I’ll remember, although certain characters are more memorable than others. maybe it’s the dialogue… I’ll have to pay attention with the next book I read.

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    • Elise Rome Said:

      Hi Margo! I think an author’s voice can definitely be as memorable as individual character voices and just as enjoyable, too. =)

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