Recently I finished revisions on my next historical romance. It should be out in June 2010, and it’s tentatively titled DECEIVING THE DUKE. But that title will probably change!
During revisions I had the task of making the hero sexier. I thought a lot about how to do that, thought a lot about what makes a hero sexy. I came up with this list. I’d love to hear if you agree or disagree and if you have more to add!
1. He’s dangerous and untamed.
In real life, this is not the guy I’d want to be married to, but you can’t deny that romance novels with dangerous heroes are very popular. There must be something to this! So what makes a hero dangerous? He’s unpredictable. He’s not afraid to risk it all. He doesn’t follow the rules. What makes him untamed? No woman has ever held his heart before. He doesn’t care what society thinks of him.
2. He doesn’t talk a lot.
Again, a guy who didn’t talk would drive me nuts in real life, but in a romance novel, often the less a hero says, the better. The few words he does utter have that much more meaning. He doesn’t blather on about his feelings and thoughts. He keeps all of that to himself, making him kind of mysterious. His silence also draws the heroine to him. She wants to know what’s going on inside him. She wants him to open up to her.
3. He’s tall, dark, and handsome.
Again, we all have personal preferences. You might like blond men (in which case read PRIDE AND PETTICOATS, which features a blond hero!) or short men. But most readers want to read about a hero who is tall—taller than the heroine at least—dark—if not in looks then in attitude—and handsome. I know there are quite a few well-known books who feature sexy heroes who aren’t handsome (I’m thinking JANE EYRE), but by the end of it, hasn’t Mr. Rochester’s ugliness become handsome to Jane? And he’s definitely dangerous, dark, and brooding (i.e. silent).
So, agree? Disagree? What else makes a sexy hero?
Check back Monday. I’ll be blogging on what makes a heroine appealing!



































































































Oct 23rd
2009
7:05 am
kristan higgins Said:
Interesting, Shana! I immediately thought of the Beast in B&the B…Heathcliff…Phantom. And my one of my most favorite historicals ever, Lord of Scoundrels by Loretta Chase. Sigh! What a great hero, and a very ugly hero as well. Whatever the other qualities, though, I think the sexiest quality for a hero is kindness. He might be a brute in many ways, but it’s when he’s kind or thoughtful that the heroine falls for him, don’t you think?
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Oct 23rd
2009
7:17 am
Margo Maguire Said:
Another thing is when the hero (especially in historicals) decides the heroine is his “queen.” It’s often completely subtle, but once he’s made that mental commmitment, it’s really sexy.
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Oct 23rd
2009
8:08 am
Solveig Said:
Seems you´ve got it down right :Ö) Although I don´t care whether he is dark haired or blond as long as they are tall and broad shouldered. My favourite all time heros are, so far, Kristan´s Maloner the Loner and Sabrina Jeffries´ Dragon viscount Marcus North. “Sigh” (very flushed) but the hero must also be able to laugh at himself. Men of action who don´t spend time blathering are the best :Ö) It makes it all the more delicious when all the goooey sweethness they are hiding inside spills out in the end (but only to the heroine of course ;Ö)
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Oct 23rd
2009
8:25 am
Catherine Kean Said:
Excellent list! I love the tall, dark, handsome, dangerous, untamed, brooding hero, especially if, beneath his tough exterior, he has a tender heart.
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Oct 23rd
2009
8:30 am
kristan higgins Said:
Thanks, Solveig! And Margo, I liked your comment about him making her a queen. Bring it on, hero!
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Oct 23rd
2009
2:26 pm
Shana Said:
Oh! I have word that the title for my June release HAS changed. It’s now THE MAKING OF A DUCHESS.
Love hearing all of your opinions on heroes. I just started a new book, and I can use all the suggestions.
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Oct 23rd
2009
5:13 pm
Romantic Girl Said:
You hit the nail on the head for me. In fiction, I love the brooding, dark hero. I can only think of one of my faves right now (though there are many more) which is Houston from Lorraine Heath’s Texas Destiny…very dark and brooding, but not exactly handsome since he wore an eye patch and bore scars from war. But how he falls for the heroine and everything he does for her…makes my heart melt.
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