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Beginnings and Endings

Authors put a lot of thought into the beginnings and endings of the books we write. We want to hook you in the first paragraph or two. We want to draw you in and compel you to keep on reading.

 How do we do this?

That is a very good question, and I’m sure there have been hundreds of classes and workshops given to aspiring writers on this very subject.

 My take on it? I think we authors want to make you wonder who the hero or heroine is, and how they’re going to deal with whatever’s been thrown at them. We don’t usually give you a lot of “backstory” right away – that’s the information that you’re going to need in order to understand where the character is coming from. No, we’re going to dribble that information throughout the first couple of chapters (not pages!). Because nothing is more boring than reading through someone’s past history. Besides, we can hit you with some aspect of the character’s backstory when it’ll be really compelling.

 For example, maybe the hero had a harsh nanny or tutor. The author isn’t going to simply tell you that – we want you to understand what that part of his life was like by showing you how he reacts to the same kind of harshness in another situation. Or perhaps he has a terrible fear of something … the reader might know about it, but he’s reluctant to reveal it to the heroine.  The reader understands his conflict, but the heroine is blithely ignorant of it – until she gains a greater understanding of him and his character.

 So we want to hook you in the beginning of the book with something so compelling, you can’t help but keep reading. Maybe that will work best in a prologue. In a good prologue, the author can suck you into the story with a few pages that describe an earlier event, and then the reader has an idea about what’s at stake before the story even begins.

 Laird jpegIn my October book, Taken by the Laird, I wrote a prologue that takes place in St. George’s Church in Mayfair – the fashionable place for weddings in the early nineteenth century. Only the villains appear in the prologue, and they’re waiting for the heroine (the intended bride) to appear. They show their true colors during that one scene, and it becomes clear why the heroine has slipped away and fled London during the night, just before her wedding.

In romance, a happy ending is essential.  And it’s not just that the hero and heroine get together. We like all the loose ends to be tied up satisfactorily. There is usually more than one plot thread running through every book, and most readers want to see them resolved. They want the villain to get his just desserts, and the hero and heroine to be well on their way to perpetual bliss. 

However, the book might be part of a series. The murderer might not always be caught, or the gang dispersed, or the ghost destroyed…Maybe there’s a serial killer who wasn’t caught and will make his appearance in future books. Even so, this hero and heroine are happy and secure. They don’t have to worry about that killer any more (although the next H & H are going to be in for it when the next book is released!) 

Sometimes we write an epilogue. When there’s a sequel coming, the epilogue can foreshadow troubles to come. If it’s not part of a series, it can give the reader a taste of what happens with the hero and heroine after the dust has settled, after their issues have been resolved and they’ve made their commitment to each other. Maybe it covers the action that occurs right after the story, or it can be years later. 

Taken by the Laird has an epilogue, and it takes place in St. George’s Church, right where the prologue was set. The main characters are the hero and heroine, although it is not their wedding. Even so, it gave me the purest feeling of satisfaction to make the prologue and epilogue resonate together, I’m not sure how many readers will notice. And that doesn’t really matter. The epilogue ties up every question that was raised in the book and answers it to the reader’s satisfaction. I hope. :-)  

What do you all think of prologues and epilogues? Like them? Hate them? Which kind do you like and dislike?

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  1. Emmanuelle Said:

    I love Epilogues. You can’t imagine how desappointed I am everytime I realise a book I’ve loved reading doesn’t have an epilogue !! I love all kinds of epilogues. My favorite ones take place years in the H/H’s wedding. A baby is always a plus ,-)
    Prologues are different. I don’t particularly care for them in general. Sometimes they’re very useful though. For instance in Lord of Scoundrel we get to see the hero’s childhood and how it could scar him for life.

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  2. Laura Said:

    It depends on how the prologue and epilogue are handled for me. I once read a book where the prologue was great! Hooked me in immediately. Couldn’t wait to get back to that point in the story to see how it was resolved. Then, while reading the story, I realized I was about three pages from the end and this huge event that had hooked me in in the prologue was just a blip on the screen in the meat of the story. I mean, it wasn’t really but it was barely touched on, to the point that I didn’t realize it had happened. Very disappointing. But for the most part, I like a prologue that gives you a taste of what’s to come.

    I like a epilogue that wraps everything up very nicely or shows you a glimpse of the future.

    What I don’t like, is a series that doesn’t have stand-alone stories. A series where I have to read the entire series to know who the killer is, is a series I won’t finish. I want to be able to read a series in any order I choose and not have something in a previous book spoiled for me. And not only will I not buy (and read) the next in the series, the author has probably lost me for any other books or series. Really not a fan of the “must-buy-all-my-books-to-find-out-how-it-ends” thing.

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  3. Linda Henderson Said:

    A catchy prologue is great but I really like a story to have an epilogue. I like to know what happens to them after their HEA. Whether they have children or if there is family conflict if they work it out. I just like an ending after the ending.

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  4. Rainy Said:

    Again, it depends. As in every piece of writing, it’s got to add something to the story. I enjoy reading something that gives me a glimpse into the past to maybe tease me into the present. It’s a great way to give important character information without the feeling of stopping the story.
    Epilogues are wonderful in serials. I suppose they are a double-edged sword otherwise because an epilogue is tying up some loose ends which can be very satisfying when it is ending the reader hoped would happen.
    However, sometimes it’s not what we wanted to happen so an epilogue gone in another direction could actually negate the reader’s sense of a particular hope for the future they’d imagined.

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  5. kristan higgins Said:

    Yep, I agree…depends on the book and the author. I’ve done books with prologues and epilogues, and I’ve done books without them. To me, the important thing is to end with that sigh of satisfaction. A truly great epilogue does what Margo’s book seems to…completes the circle perfectly.

    That cover is amazing, Margo! Can’t wait to read the book.

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  6. Margo Maguire Said:

    Emmanuelle and Linda – I agree! I love epilogues that show the h/h years later, maybe with a family. I wrote an epilogue once that occurred several years later, and the heroineis in labor, delivering their sixth (?) child/ren. Twins. It was THE VIRTUOUS KNIGHT, and the family the h/h have together resonates well with the conflicts in the story.

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  7. Margo Maguire Said:

    Laura – I know!! The series that have books you MUST read in the right order. Really annoy me. Although there are a few exceptions. OUTLANDER, for one.

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  8. Margo Maguire Said:

    Rainy – you’re right. They have to fit the story. And ack!! I would hate to read an epilogue that didn’t go where I thought it should. That would ruin the story for me!

    Kristan – you are so right about that sigh of satisfaction. Or maybe a tear because all turned out well when it might have turned out so badly…

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  9. Shana Said:

    I seem to always write prologues, but now I call them Chapter 1 because editors don’t like them. I often write epilogues as well. I like to read really sappy epilogues. As far as prologues, i don’t like them if they’re too long or I can’t relate them to the story within the first 20 pages.

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  10. Quilt Lady Said:

    I like both. Especialy the epilogues. They are the true ending of the story and when they tie together, its even better.

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  11. Margo Maguire Said:

    Exactly, Quilt Lady. Don’t you just love that sigh at the end when everything comes together?

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  12. catslady Said:

    I too like both. The more information the author wants to give me, the more I want to read. The prologues make a wonderful beginning and the epilogues and wonderful ending.

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  13. RobynDeHart Said:

    I love prologues and do them often. As a reader I don’t care one way or the other about prologues, but I love epilogues. Beginnings and endings are so difficult, you’re so right about that, Margo. And I ditto Kristan’s comment about your lovely cover – the colors are spectacular.

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  14. Nancy Robards Thompson Said:

    Each story I write dictates whether I include a prologue of and epilogue. But I tend to write more epilogues than prologues, probably because, as you said, Margo, the epilogue ensures that all the story threads are tied up nice and neatly.

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  15. Emily McKay Said:

    I like both epilogues and prologues. I love them as a writers and as a reader. As a writer, one of the things I love about them is they seem so easy to write.

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  16. Janette Kenny Said:

    I’ve written prologues and epilogues, but so far the only ones that have made it into print are the epilogues. My first editor hated prologues. But I totally agree, Margo, a prologue can really set the stage and suck you deep into the story.

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