
This time of year reminds me of the middle of a novel. That time at the end of summer but before the holidays just kind of sags. Everyone (merchants, at least) want to jump forward to Christmas and skip uneventful September and October. That’s why we see Christmas decorations in all the stores already.
I get two or three letters from readers each month, and a surprising number of them have questions about writing. This month I got two separate letters with questions about how to write the middle of the book. It seems these writers got started and then found the story dragging.
I can totally relate to that. As a beginning writer, my middles went on and on—a never-ending stream of scene after scene. I still don’t enjoy writing middles. I want to get to the end (Christmas)!
But it helps me to get through the middle when I remind myself that it has a purpose and that there are ways to avoid the sag.
These are just a few tips and tricks I use. I’d love to hear yours.
1) The middle is there to show character growth. Give your character challenges so that s/he can grow.
2) The middle is where the hero and heroine fall in love (even though they may not realize it). In the beginning you set the foundation for their love. In the middle give it some firm support.
3) The middle is where you develop your secondary characters. Develop them well, and they may get a book of their own. Give them some scenes, but make sure those scenes advance the plot.
4) If your middle is sagging, give your hero and heroine a new problem. The villain throws them a new twist, new information comes to light, or—the old favorite—someone turns up dead.



























































































Oct 30th
2008
6:32 am
Kristan Higgins Said:
Love your visual, Shane!
For me, the middle is the try-and-fail time…the hero and heroine recognize that the other is “the one,” but it’s still too overwhelming to make the leap. Every scene has to bring new insecurities or challenges. And yes, I do love that “body-through-the-roof”…something completely unexpected (so long as it’s not ridiculous, you know?).
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Oct 30th
2008
7:06 am
Emily McKay Said:
Good post, ’cause writing my own sagging middle right now. For me, this is also the part of the book where the reader gets to really see the characters together on the page. See how they interact together and what the dynamic of their relationship is going to be.
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Oct 30th
2008
7:20 am
RobynDeHart Said:
Great post, Shane. I’ve always been one of those strange writers who hates writing beginnings and endings of books and loves to write the middle. That was different with the book I’m working on right now, in that the beginning seemed to just fall out of me, but the rest of the book was like pulling teeth. And the revisions have been even more painful than that. I suspect I’ll go back to my old familiar patter though and love that middle sometime in the future. To me it’s where all the fun stuff happens, all the action, the gooey stuff, it’s the heart of the book and usually once I hit the middle I’ve been with the characters long enough to get into their skin.
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Oct 30th
2008
12:24 pm
Lee Said:
Great post, the sagging middle is do or die time for me and my characters…Its hard getting over the hump…
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Oct 30th
2008
8:46 pm
Margo Maguire Said:
Thanks for those great reminders of things to do in the middle of a book, Shane! Hmmmm… Who can I kill?
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