September 30, 2006
Back Cover Copy
Written by Cindy Kirk in Jaunty PostI received my shipment of Silhouette Desires and as I was reading the back cover copy (to see which one I wanted to read first)….I realized the power of that brief tease. I didn’t have any trouble picking which one I wanted to read. I’m going to post two of the four here and see if you chose the same one. If you don’t read category romance, pick the one that you feel is most intriquing.
1.
What’s the Bride Worth?
Wealthy rancher Mitch Ramsey had never given much of a second look to his neighbor Emma Davis, until an unexpected encounter led to a night of unbridled passion. Mitch figured their affair could be a discreet diversion, one they had both gone into with eyes wide-open.
Then Emma’s father made him an offer he couldn’t refuse. Marry Emma and Mitch would inherit what he had always coveted–the entire Davis ranch. But Emma was never to know….
2.
The Pretender
Successful businessman Ryan Bennett had agreed to masquerade as his wealthy cousin for a blind date. But from the moment Ryan saw Julie Nelson to the moment he should have said good-night, he was captivated and couldn’t resist an invitation to share her bed. In the hazy afterglow of their heated lovemaking, Myan confessed he true identiy, claiming the passion between them was real despite his deception, but Julie wasn’t buying it. Obviously she considered him the enemy.
Except now she was having the enemy’s baby…
Also if you have any back cover copy that you’d like to share….I’d love to see it.
I thought it might be fun for you to see what happens when I try to write a back cover copy for a proposal. For my first Avon book “When She Was Bad” which will be out in July 2007, here’s the back cover copy I wrote at the top of my synopsis to give them a flavor of what the book is about:
Living two lives has never been so much fun…
Jennifer Carman spent the first thirty years of her life playing it safe. But all that changes when she reinvents herself as sexy Jasmine Coret and begins an affair with handsome businessman, Robert Marshall.
Being a bad girl is a blast until Jenny forgets the rules… and falls in love with the one man who can never be hers.
This is what I submitted at the top of the synopsis for my follow-up novel (tentatively titled “When She Was Good” which will be out in April 2008
She lives life in the fast lane…
Thirty-two-year-old Marcee Robbens can’t remember the last time she was good. The irreverent party girl loves life in the fast lane and didn’t plan on ever slowing down. But that was before she’s sideswiped by a blast from the past.
When Marcee left home vowing never to return, her youngest brother was only a baby. Now a family emergency has unexpectedly dropped sixteen-year-old Camden into Marcee’s free-wheeling lap.
He’s just about to lose control…
Sam McKelvey moved to a small town to give his teenage daughter a better life. As a father and Police Chief, Sam has an image to uphold. But when a former lover moves in next door and makes it clear she wants to take up where they left off, his tightly held control starts to unravel.
Surprised by love…
Is their secret affair a recipe for disaster? Or for a happily-ever-after ending that will make even the most cynical believe in the power of love?












